very nice!

I *really* liked this. Your style showed through in the production, even if certain pieces were cliched [where's that damn accented e when you need it]. Your animation could use a little refinement- I'm not sure if you're going for a sort of 'messy-esque' line quality, but I think the tone of your presentation calls for a cleaner line quality.

As for the length... it was rather short, but I'm not sure it really needed to be longer- you got the point across in a very clear and simple way.

Lastly, I think I saw a few grammatical errors in the 'pre-movie script'. Don't recall them at the moment, but it might be something to look into.

All taht said, Very nice, especially for a first submission.
Hope to see more.

Stale.

Really, LtMcMuffin summed up most of my post here- syntactical errors aside.

You were on to something for a long time, the rants were great, singing was a nice addition, and I looked forward to your next production. But now... You just need variety- something new. I'm sure a whole lotta people will be more than happy to toss you 'all their 5' or whatever, but I'm speakin for a minority, a disappointed minority,

'Please, don't make us embarrassed to have liked your presentations- branch out and expand, and let us find you funny once more.'