very nice!

I *really* liked this. Your style showed through in the production, even if certain pieces were cliched [where's that damn accented e when you need it]. Your animation could use a little refinement- I'm not sure if you're going for a sort of 'messy-esque' line quality, but I think the tone of your presentation calls for a cleaner line quality.

As for the length... it was rather short, but I'm not sure it really needed to be longer- you got the point across in a very clear and simple way.

Lastly, I think I saw a few grammatical errors in the 'pre-movie script'. Don't recall them at the moment, but it might be something to look into.

All taht said, Very nice, especially for a first submission.
Hope to see more.